***This post is part of the Indifiction Workshop and is written based on the plot given by Jayashree Srivastan. You can also find the below post in the Indifcition website here.***
Thud!
Phew, Munna did manage to break the lock at last. I never
thought he was going to do it. He had said that he will break the lock in 5
minutes flat and given his track record of past few years, I, like a fool,
believed him. Silly me. Just because he had managed to break locks of numerous
homes and lockers in seconds didn’t make him a master, no matter how much he
liked to think so.
Oh God, how much of a wimp this Munna is! He actually
believes those stupid rumors about this room being haunted by ghosts. Ha! Who
would want to live on this God-forsaken earth even after their death? Only a
moron like Munna would think of such people.
As I pushed the door with all my might, I heard the sound
that I was expected: loud creak of the doors that were being opened after a
long, long time. I just hope my guts are right and I manage to find enough
treasure to live the rest of my life in luxury: cars, swimming pools, and clubs.
Alas, who wants to keep on planning petty heists throughout his lifetime? As
soon as I entered the room, I felt cool. Great, at least this room was not an
inferno as the sweltering atmosphere out there was.
“Raja? Where are you? I am not able to see you. It’s so dark
here.”
“Of course it’s dark. It’s not your bloody home where your
wife is waiting for you with hot dinner. Lit your candle. You will be able to
see well. My eyes have already adjusted to this darkness.”
As I stepped forward, I could make out a rectangular shape
of a huge chest. Yes, this was it. I am 100% sure that alas we have struck
gold. Literally. As I started pulling at the lock of the chest, Munna started
screaming behind me. “Who’s there? Come forward in the light? Who’s there?”
I knew Munna was not going to give up. So I ignored him and
started breaking the lock on my own. I didn’t want to entrust this task to
Munna or he would take an entire night to do it. How hard can it be? I can just
hammer away the lock, can’t I? “Munna, throw some light over here. I need to
break this lock with the hammer.”
“R-Raja, I think we should leave. Something weird is going
around here. I don’t feel safe here.”
“Why? What happened? Did you see anything that you
shouldn’t?”
“No, nothing like that but it’s just that it’s spooky over
here. Especially, that painting a king over there. It seems like he’s grinning
at us. His eyes don’t look right to me.”
I turned around to see the painting. Oh yes, quite a
majestic painting. Although I have no idea which king he was as I never paid
attention to the particularities of the rumor, I was mesmerized. What jewels!
Just look at his fine clothes! Is that emerald in his turban and rubies and
pearls in his necklace? Oh, how I wish to find that treasure in this chest!
“Okay. Enough of this silliness; just throw some light over
here. I need to break this lock. And be fast. I don’t want to spend an entire
night opening this chest. We will need time to carry the treasure we find back
to home before the night is out, and it’s already midnight.”
With just two blows, the lock opened. Ah, this lock is
weaker than the one at the door. Shaking my head at the stupidity of the
so-called king to use such weak locks, I pulled open the chest. I simply
couldn’t believe my eyes for what I saw. My wish just got fulfilled. There is
that turban with big emerald smack in the middle. And ah, there’s that august
ruby and pearl necklace above the crown. Yes, we are rich. Finally I was going
to shake off the dust of this filthy village and live in style at some big
city, where everybody minded their own business.
“Yes Raja, you were right! We are rich now! Yay!” Saying
this, Munna threw himself over the open chest and started digging all the
jewels and wearing them.
“Hey, what are you doing?” I simply couldn’t understand what
was Munna doing hugging all those coins and necklaces instead of starting to
pack them. Couldn’t he understand the importance of time?
“Well, I am just enjoying little bit of our good fortune
before I start packing away. See this beautiful cup. I think these are real
sapphires in gold setting. What do you think?”
“Just shut up and get those bags you left over there. We
need to start packing if we want to reach home before sunrise.”
“Oh, okay. I will get those bags.”
Just as I was caressing a particular bracelet, I heard Munna
scream. “Raja, get away! Get away from there. There’s this lady in red sari
floating over you.”
I looked up but couldn’t see anything but darkness. The fear
in Munna’s voice made my blood run cold. Even though I didn’t believe in ghosts
and all those rumors, I could hear something different in Munna’s voice. I
immediately took out the lighter from my pocket and threw the light toward the
ceiling. Still I couldn’t see anything.
“Raja, stop scaring me. Get your ass over here. We need to
start.”
“Munna, I am not kidding. She’s just standing over you in
red sari with loose hair. Please, please come over here. Blood is dripping from
her mouth and she has a small sword on her hand. Please, please listen to me.
Please. I promise I am not going crazy. I too want that treasure but only if I
manage to live.” Saying this, Munna started crying loudly like a baby. Oh my
god, this is so creepy!
Suddenly my eyes fell on a sword lying on the top of the
turban. Where did this sword come from? It wasn’t there five minutes back, or
was it? Out of curiosity, I lifted it. Hmm. Even though it’s light in weight,
it’s feels sharp and strong enough to pass through a thick tree trunk without
any problem.
“Raja, throw that sword away. It’s dripping with blood. Your
hands have started getting bloody too. Please throw that away and come here. We
need to leave.”
Now, where’s the blood? Why can’t I see it? Why is only
Munna able to see it? It’s not as if I don’t believe Munna but this is beyond madness.
When we are finally having riches beyond imagination within our grasp, Munna is
losing his sanity. I took the sword and started walking toward Munna. I wanted
to show him how clean and beautiful the sword was.
“Munna, please calm down. See this sword is clean. There’s
nothing wrong with it. Let’s get those bags and get to work.”
“No, no, don’t come near me. How can you not see the blood
dripping from the sword unto your hands? See that female is still standing over
there and laughing maniacally over you.” Again I looked back with the hope to
see something. I was getting tired of Munna’s hysterics. Either I wanted to see
the ghosts that Munna somehow managed to see without being high or drunk, or I
wanted to get down to business. But again I was disappointed. There was nothing
but darkness.
“Enough is enough. Munna, pull yourself together or we are
done. I don’t want to spend my time with a lunatic.”
“That’s it! You don’t want to believe me because now you
want to have everything for yourself. How can you be so callous to me? Me!!!
Your childhood friend who supported through thick and think! I should have
listened to my wife. I shouldn’t have come here. Well, I don’t want your bloody
money. I am going back. I don’t want to become rich. I am happy being a petty
thief.”
Saying this, Munna started running away but before he could
go out, the doors crashed closed with a bang. Both Munna and I were stunned.
How did the doors get closed? There’s not even wind strong enough to do that. Suddenly
I started feeling cold. Something odd was going on; I couldn’t decipher what
was wrong but I knew one thing: I was getting goose bumps. Before I could
react, Munna again started yelling and sobbing.
“I told you! I told you! I told you so many times not to
come here. But no, you didn’t have to listen to me. Oh God! Oh God, what are we
going to do now! See that woman is coming near you again. Raja, for God’s sake,
come here! Don’t stand over there. She will kill you; she’s already eyeing you as
if you are a piece of chicken. Please, please listen to me. Come here.”
I too started believing that there’s something creepy going
on here and we should have left this place alone. Clutching sword in my right
hand, I started moving toward Munna. Maybe we can use this sword to pry open
the doors and get out. Maybe we could come back during daytime and try to steal
these jewels then.
“No, no, don’t come near me with that bloody sword. It’s not
safe in your hands. It seems like that sword has a life of its own. Throw it.
Throw it away before it kills you. Just throw that away.”
I again looked at the sword intently. I still couldn’t see
any trace of blood on it. “Munna, we need this sword to pry open the doors. Do
you want to spend your entire night over here? I am ready to let go of this
treasure and go home with you.”
“Yes! Yes, I want to get out but keep that sword away. This
sword is controlled by that witch. It will kill you and me. If you continue to
keep this sword in your hands, we might never escape alive. Throw it, throw it
away.”
As I couldn’t find anything wrong with the sword, I decided
to ignore Munna. Alas, what was more important? Reassuring Munna or getting
out? As I moved forward, Munna started backing away from me, screaming “No! No!
Please Raja, don’t do this! Don’t kill me! Please, please, for God’s sake,
please throw away the sword.”
Exasperated by Munna’s illogical pleadings, I just sped up
to reach the doors. Sooner the doors are open, sooner we can get out. Just as I
reached the doors, Munna suddenly threw himself over me to knock away the sword
from my hand. But I didn’t want to throw it. It was our lifeline. It was going
to help us open those stupid doors. Why can’t he simply get it? Why does he
always have to get his own way? Why can’t he just trust me for once? Was that
too much to ask from your childhood friend? Determined to get the doors open
with this sword, I firmed my hold over the sword. Munna gripped my wrist and
started squeezing it to loosen my grip. “Munna, leave it. I need the sword. I…I
sa-said leave it.” Now this hustle was on the verge of turning into a full-on
fight, which I didn’t want to get into.
Suddenly I lost my footing and we both fell. I on the bottom
with Munna on the top, screaming and writhing. I saw Munna’s eyes getting rolled
at the same time felt something wet on my hands. I was horrified when I
realized what it was. Blood. Munna’s blood. When we fell on the floor, Munna
fell on the sword that somehow got wedged between our bodies. How could this
happen? My hand was on the side. How did it come between our bodies? Oh God! I
just killed my friend. I actually killed my childhood friend, with whom I used
to play, with whom I planned heists. Oh God! This was just so wrong. I started
feeling sick. I wanted to puke. Everything was roiling in my stomach. I
couldn’t breathe. I need space. I need to get out. I need to get cleaned. Now
my hands, shirt and pants were wet. Wet with blood. Warm blood. Munna’s blood.
Oh God, my best friend’s blood was on me. I have to get out. Right now before I
lose my mind. I need to think. And think fast. Pushing Munna’s body on side, I
scrambled up. I still had that sword in my hand. I wanted to throw it away but
I simply couldn’t make my hand let go of it.
“Hahahahaha……Hahahahaha…….”
Who’s laughing? Who could laugh at this time? I got to the
burning candle that was lying on the floor couple of feet away. Just as I straightened
up with the candle, I saw a female clad in red sari with loose hair. Oh God,
she is what Munna was talking about. Oh God! Munna was right. Blood is really
dripping out of her grinning mouth.
“Hahahahaha…..Hahahaha……” She was laughing like a lunatic
and flying in the air. Oh God, I need to get out. I need to get out right now.
I quickly turned toward the doors and tried to pull it open.
But they didn’t budge. Taking a deep breath, I again pulled the doors with all
my might. They didn’t even shake. Exhausted, I gave up. Turning around, I
leaned back on the doors with the sword raised over me, ready to strike that witch
if she comes up to me. But she didn’t come near me. She kept on laughing like a
lunatic and flying in the air. Her sari and hair was billowing like a small
girl swinging in the garden. It was a bloodcurdling sight that I never imagined
to witness. For the first time in my life, I started praying. I started to beg
forgiveness for the robberies that I had done in this lifetime. I started
promising God that I will reform if I manage to get out alive. I closed my
eyes. I didn’t want to see that witch playing in the air. I closed my eyes
tight and started praying with ghoulish laughter ringing in my ears. Suddenly
the laughter stopped. I got hopeful. Maybe the witch got tired and she went
away. Still, I didn’t want to open my eyes but I knew I had to.
Taking a deep breath, I slowly opened my eyes and nearly
missed a heartbeat. That witch was standing just couple of inches from me with
an evil gleam in her eyes. The red pupils of her eyes were as large as the size
of her eyes. Looking at me, she was licking her bloody lips. It seemed that
blood constant emitted out of her mouth and she kept on licking it over and
over. I wanted to move away from her but I couldn’t with the doors at my back
and her in the front. She again started laughing, sending chills through my
spine. It seemed like she was playing a cat and mouse game with me. She was
toying with me, and I, being a helpless mouse, couldn’t do anything. Suddenly I
realized I still had a sword in my hand. Sharp and lightweight sword that was
easy to manage. Easy to run through her, wasn’t it?
As if she realized my thoughts, she got blissful expressions
on her face. She still moved closer to me.
I felt her touch – cold touch, a touch that felt like thousands of worms
crawling all over my body. Just as I lifted my sword and swung it, she hugged
me tightly. She started kissing me. She opened her mouth on mine and started
sucking. Blood started coming out of my mouth. I could feel her long tongue
gliding around my mouth, dueling with my tongue. She was sucking my mouth as a
newborn babe does from a mother’s breast. My shirt was getting wetter. I
started feeling weak. Pain started setting in. I was losing blood through the
ribs where the sword was lodged, and through the mouth where the witch was
sucking.
I wanted to hit her. I wanted to kill her. I wanted her to
suffer the way I was suffering. But she kept on kissing me, kept on sucking me
until I couldn’t feel anything. Then there was darkness. Pitch black darkness
that was beckoning me like a mother. And with a smile, I surrendered.
Surrendered to that kiss of death.
Very nice take on the plot Pankti.. Enjoyed it thoroughly... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Nabanita :D
DeleteThat was very scary in the middle, the line where you said, she is floating was the scariest. Enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteThere were moments of chill... Liked it a lot :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Namrota. :)
DeleteI felt like going on and on with the story till it got over but I got distracted when one of them likened the other to a piece of chicken. That comparison was not needed and seems a bit of a dampener to the one who is engrossed in the story. It totally broke my concentration.
ReplyDeleteHmm. Then what would have been a better analogy if I want to compare the way witch was looking?
DeleteScary..I was petrified, horrified Pankti. Very well written and if this was your first attempt in horror..you are a damn good writer!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sfurti :)
DeleteEngrossing read.. Did you really plan the urge to break one lock (the real one) in the beginning and the urge to break another lock (lip lock with the witch) in the end. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteHaha...Shri, I didn't plan it that way. In fact, due to the kiss in the end, I had to change the original title of the story. Thanks for reading it. :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the story. That was chillingly frightening, and written cleanly, in a way that doesn't feel cooked up, or fiction. Though I personally would have loved to see an extended ending, letting us know what happened the next day?
ReplyDeleteThanks CK. As you might have noticed, I wrote this story as a part of a fiction workshop. While writing the story, we were supposed to follow the guidelines set by the workshop. So this story is written in accordance with those guidelines.
DeleteI am glad you liked the story. Thanks for dropping by :)