Thursday, 6 June 2013

Broken But Alive!



I am broken but alive,
Living and breathing,
Not cold and dead.
I may be beaten, but still I will fight,
I may yield but still I will stand straight, 

I may get hurt but still I will hold my head high.
To defeat me, you will have to kill me,
Until then, I am broken but alive.
Living and breathing.

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16 comments:

  1. Nabanita6 June 2013 at 06:33

    Very deep! Wonderful!

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  2. Paresh Kale6 June 2013 at 10:21

    good words :-)

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  3. Unknown6 June 2013 at 10:57

    Superb...love it, broken but alive. Superb line and very nicely penned..

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  4. The Mukhtiars8 June 2013 at 00:12

    nice one

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  5. The Mukhtiars8 June 2013 at 00:34

    beautiful

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  6. Vinay Leo R.11 June 2013 at 07:59

    How very strong, deep and inspiring too, Pankti. :) Lovely.

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  7. Anunoy Samanta19 June 2013 at 11:23

    kisko challenge kiya re bapa... deva re deva...!

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  8. Anonymous17 October 2013 at 06:26

    Nice poem...such wonderful and deep feelings expressed in too few words :) Loved it :) Thanks for your comment on my blog..Encouraging :)

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    1. Unknown17 October 2013 at 06:44

      You are welcome. I really did like your smiling habit. Thanks for dropping by :)

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  9. Anonymous13 April 2014 at 23:39

    One day, all the puzzles are going to fit so gracefully that the world will be stunned at the beautiful canvas you will paint.. :) Then you will know why it took so long.. broken isn't the end.. it is just a bump on the road that will take you to a place you have not even imagined of.
    Lovies.

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